Pretty much my only problem with this comic is that it wasn't immediately apparent that the lower legs were supposed to be burnt specifically. I got that they were injured, and the title made it obvious that they were injured because of the backpack, but it looked like the person had just smashed up his lower legs on touchdown.
If this had been a three-panel'er, with the first panel having the person flying fine, the second having him loosing control, and the third having him burning his
All in all, though,
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